Tham khảo tài liệu 'objective ielts intermediate workbook part 4', ngoại ngữ, toefl - ielts - toeic phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | Writing workout 2 structuring an essay General Training and Academic Writing Task 2 1 Look at this Task 2 and think about how you might answer it. Below are five popular jobs. State which three you consider to be the most important to society today doctor teacher engineer computer programmer journalist Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 2 Read the following two essays. Which one do you think would achieve higher marks Think about 1 how well the question is answered 2 how the essay is organised 3 if there are relevant examples of personal expericnce knowledge 4 the range of vocabulary used 5 if there arc examples of complex sentences. Which jobs ace -the most- important to cưc society today I believe that of -the five jobs mentioned -these three are of -the utmost importance a doc-tor a teacher and a journalist. first of all I would lice -to saij -that just one doctor can make a big difference -to the well-being of the inhabitants of a village or town. Let me give you an example. In -the past people . reliant on witch doctors or wise women. Nowadays thanhs to doctors we all rave access to better diagnose and -treatment. Teachers are also Important to our society. If there is no access to education then a society will remain in the dark. ages. People need -to learn and understand about themselves and -the way -that the Earth wor es. One example Is the education of women. It is a well-k-nown fact that when women are educated the whole of society beneftts as the women will pass their k-nowledge down to their children. finally I am going to consider the role of journalists in society. A good journalistwill find out as much as possible about things which may affect society for good or bad. Without the journalists who investigated the Watergate affair for example we would never have found out- about what Nixon had been doing. Consequently I believe that journalists are .
