Tham khảo tài liệu 'the complete guide to the toefl ibt writing part 10', ngoại ngữ, toefl - ielts - toeic phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | 694 Section 4 Guide to Writing Prompt 6 Your hometown has just received a grant from an international organization to fund a single improvement project. Which of the following would you recom- mend to receive the funding the city airport the police department the local schools the public transportation system the art museum the streets and roads the fire department the city parks the local hospitals Give specific examples and reasons to support your recommendation. Response 6 Lesson 28 Checking and Editing the Independent Response You should give yourself about five minutes after writing the essay to look for and correct mistakes. You will need to look for the same kinds of mistakes that you looked for when checking and editing the Integrated Writing Response. A Checking and Editing Content and Organizational Errors Again there will not be enough time to make any major changes in the organization of your responses. However you should quickly check for the following problems 1. Problems in the introduction Does the introduction accurately restate the prompt Is there a thesis statement that summarizes your opinion of the prompt In some responses the thesis statement is given in the conclusion. 2. Problems in the body paragraphs Does all the information in the body paragraphs develop and support your opinion as given in the thesis statement Are there reasons examples details or experiences from your own life that support general statements Are there sentences in the body that are unrelated to the thesis statement If so delete them. Do the ideas flow clearly from sentence to sentence and paragraph to paragraph If not can you add transition words that improve the flow of ideas 3. Problems in the conclusion Is there a conclusion that gives readers the feeling that the essay is complete B Checking and Editing Grammatical Errors The grammatical errors that you will be checking for in the Independent Response are the same as those in the Integrated Response. The most common
