It is designed to be used by individuals working on their own and for teachers or tutors helping students to learn or review basic writing skills. Practice on 501 grammar and writing questions should go a long way m alleviating writing anxiety, too! | For more material and information please visit Tai Lieu Du Hoc at Page 97 422. Which of the following editorial changes in the above passage would best help to clarify the information the paragraph intends to convey a. Add a sentence between Parts 4 and 5 explaining that while the Stop Here Program allows passengers to leave the bus at almost any point passengers may board only at designated stops. b. Delete Part 6. c. Add a sentence between Parts 5 and 6 explaining the safety advantages for passengers of flagging down buses at night. d. Reverse the order of Parts 4 and 5. 423. Which of the following numbered parts contains a nonstandard use of a pronoun a. Part 1 b. Part 2 c. Part 3 d. Part 5 Answer questions 424 and 425 on the basis of the following passage. 1 In October of 1993 a disastrous wildfire swept across portions of charlesburg. 2 Five residents were killed 320 homes destroyed and 19 500 acres burned. 3 A public safety task force was formed to review emergency choice. 4 The task force findings were as follows 5 The water supply in the residential areas was insufficient some hydrants could not even be opened. 6 The task force recommended a review of hydrant inspection policy. 7 The fire companies that responded had difficulty locating specific sites. 8 Most came from other areas and were not familiar with Charlesburg. 9 The available maps were outdated and did not reflect recent housing developments. 10 Evacuation procedures were inadequate. 11 Residents reported being given conflicting and or confusing information. 12 Some residents of the Hilltop Estates subdivision ignored mandatory evacuation orders yet others were praised for their cooperation. 424. Which of the following numbered parts contains a nonstandard sentence a. Part 7 b. Part 5 c. Part 3 d. Part 12 425. Which of the following changes needs to be made to the passage a. Part 12 Change their to they re. b. Part 12 Insert a comma after others. c. Part 2 Remove the comma .
