The table below describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words. This table shows homeschooled students in | Top of Form The table below describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words. This table shows homeschooled students in Somecountry in year 1999-2004 in percenages. The main trend is that all grades including kindergarten is growing every year. Kindergarten started highest at and ended with percentage of percent with a constant increase. But grades 1-2 and grades 5-6 show a little different trend, both started at 1,5 percent in 1999 and declines (declined) a little bit in 2000. Both of them increased slowly in 2002 and both held that course to 2004 where grades 1-2 reached 2,1 percent and grades 5-6 reached percent. Grades 3-4 had a slow but steady growth throughout all six years. It started at percent in 1999 and increased by every year except in 2003 when it peaked up at percent. Grades 7-8 started at percent and stays there for three years until it rapidly rised up to and peaked at in 2004. Overall, all grades including kindergarten has had a rise at roughly minimum 1 percent and more in 6 years. This is a good report; here is how you can make it better: the coherence needs improvement, meaning the logical connection between sentences inside a paragraph and between paragraphs. Use more connective words (Furthermore, However, etc). The groupings you�ve done are fine, but try to use more variations describing those statistics: use words such as numbers, figures, percentages, etc. The grammar and the spelling need some extra attention Bottom of Form Top of Form Bottom of Form
