Tham khảo tài liệu 'the complete idiot guide part 31', ngoại ngữ, ngữ pháp tiếng anh phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | haptgr 21 Stylish Sentences Z83 Use Vivid Verbs Use verbs rather than nouns to communicate your ideas. This makes your writing more forceful and less wordy For example replace forms of to be with action verbs as the following example shows Weak In 1850 21-year-old Levi Strauss went from New York to San Francisco. Vivid In 1850 21-year-old Levi Strauss traveled from New York to San Francisco. Weak The shrieking Arctic gales sent needles of ice into their faces. Vivid The shrieking Arctic gales shot needles of ice into their faces. n Danger Will Robinson Place the adjectives adverbs phrases and clauses according to the emphasis you want to achieve in each sentence. Remember that misplaced modifiers spell trouble so be sure to place them as close as possible to the words they describe. Invert Word Order Most English sentences follow the subject-verb-direct object pattern so varying this pattern automatically creates emphasis and interest. To create stylistic variety occasionally place the verb before the subject as these examples show Subject-verb order The CEO walked in. The manager walked out. Inverted order In walked the CEO. Out walked the manager. Play with Pronouns Use the pronoun you to engage your readers. The second-person pronoun you rather than the third-person he she one gives your writing more impact because it directly addresses the reader as this example shows Weak Contributions to the employee s account will automatically be reinvested unless the employee has completed form 21 -A. Better Contributions to your account will automatically be reinvested unless you have completed form 21 -A. 284 PartS Style All the Write Stuff Take My Word for It_ j Due to state laws some companies require that documents such as consumer con-dflMT tracts and warranties meet a specific readability score that determines how easy or difficult they are to read. Such readability scores on the Frye Gunning Fog .
