Tham khảo tài liệu 'studying the gre 9', ngoại ngữ, anh ngữ phổ thông phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | ----------------------- THE GRE ANALYTICAL WRITING SECTION --------------------------------------- All in all this piece presents an unsupported argument. The evidence presented isn t very compelling as support for expanding the vegetarian cookbook collection at Cook s Books. In addition the author leaps to conclusions based on weak evidence. Finally there is no evidence that the author has considered alternative possibilities or looked at the issue from multiple perspectives. Cook s Books is after all a business so this argument should be more critically examined. 6. The following is part of a business plan developed by Yoga for Life a new yoga studio that wants to open a location in downtown Smallville. Studies show that in the past five years more and more Americans are trying to get fit and beat stress. A recent poll on showed that 60 of those polled would be interested in taking up yoga. Furthermore as a result of the recent economic downturn many people in Smallville are being forced to work longer and harder hours because companies are scaling back and cutting costs. Now more than ever there is a demand for a relaxing form of exercise at the end of the day. A yoga center with certified instructors in downtown Smallville will provide this relaxing exercise for city residents. The argument above claims that there is demand in downtown Smallville for a yoga center because not only are more people trying to get fit and beat stress but the economic downturn has also introduced a need for a relaxing energizing form of exercise. Although all of these pieces taken together may be true the connections between pieces of evidence are shaky. To begin the author cites evidence that Americans are trying to get fit and beat stress. First of all America is a large country so it is illogical to make the leap that because unnamed studies show that Americans want to get fit Smallville citizens are also looking to improve their health and fitness. Because .
