Tham khảo tài liệu 'outlinging essay 1', ngoại ngữ, anh ngữ phổ thông phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | CBEST MINI-COURSE Adopting a school uniform policy will benefit parents children and school staff. Alternatively you can use any number of words in phrases or even whole sentences that summarize the ideas you are going to write about. This is not the place to give much detail however or you will have nothing to develop in the next paragraphs. Uniform policies provide relief for parents enhance self-esteem in children and facilitate learning at school. Putting It All Together Here s one possible introduction built out of the three pieces put together. How would your life change if you could wear a practical comfortable uniform to work In many schools uniform policies have been adopted. Over 98 of our nation s schools have some kind of dress code for their students. 20 of these codes designate a certain color and style of dress. Some of these uniform regulations even include specifics on shoes socks sweaters and jackets. Over 1 000 schools each year are added to the ranks of those that have adopted stricter uniform policies for their children. Uniform policies provide relief for parents enhance self-esteem in children and facilitate learning at school. The sentences in the introductory paragraphs need to fit together so that they flow. Notice that the sentence In many schools uniform policies have been adopted has been added to make a transition from the first sentence to the third. The first talks about work. The third gives statistics about schools. A transition from work to school is needed to put these two parts together. Here s another possible introduction. In this case no transitions were needed. Notice how it flows. Imagine a school auditorium full of alert children all dressed neatly in blue and white uniforms reciting the Pledge of Allegiance. Imagine these same children happily running out to play in their blue shorts and white oxford shirts playing tag and flying on swings. Whether or not to dress public school children alike has been the subject of much
