Tham khảo tài liệu 'demonstrated english 4', ngoại ngữ, anh ngữ phổ thông phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | PRACTICE TEST 3 2 Demonstrates limited writing skills and may contain serious flaws Includes a limited or vague point of view on the question and reflects poor critical thinking using inadequate or irrelevant examples or other support Displays a weak sense of organization and or focus and may lack unity and or flow of ideas Demonstrates an inadequate command of language with limited or incorrect vocabulary and incorrect or flawed sentence structure Contains serious errors in grammar usage and mechanics that may make the writing difficult to understand 1 Demonstrates incompetence in writing and contains serious flaws Does not contain a point of view on the question or provides little or no support for the point of view Lacks organization and or focus unity and a flow of ideas Contains serious errors in vocabulary and sentence structure Contains serious errors in grammar usage and or mechanics that make the writing difficult to understand 0 An essay that does not answer the question or is blank receives a zero. Adapted from The College Board Here are examples of a couple of essays written on the assignment You might think a memorable picture would have vivid color an appealing or inspirational theme or be something you might want to display and look at every day. That is not the case with the picture that is most memorable to me. Rather it is a large mural painted in 1937 by the Spanish artist Pablo Picasso to protest the bombing of a small village in northern Spain. Surprisingly there is no vivid red color to show the flowing blood. One must imagine this for the mural is startlingly gray black and white. But there is no avoiding the horror of the images. The figures are not realistically drawn but are cubist and abstract and it is apparent that innocent civilians are being slaughtered. A mother screams with her mouth wide open her head tipped back in heart rending anguish as she holds her dead baby. A soldier lies dead on the ground clutching his broken sword and .
