Tham khảo tài liệu 'writting good or well 4', ngoại ngữ, anh ngữ phổ thông phục vụ nhu cầu học tập, nghiên cứu và làm việc hiệu quả | 198 Part IV All You Need to Know about Descriptions and Comparisons Calling All Overachievers Extra Practice Placing Descriptions Figure 15-1 Sample instruction manual exercise. Breathing deeply check out this yoga instruction manual see Figure 15-1 which my lawyer begs me to mention does not describe real postures that a normal human body can achieve. Do not try these positions at home but do look for ten errors caused by vague misplaced or dangling descriptions. After you find the clunkers correct them cross out misplaced words insert words by using carats and revise sentences in the margins of this book. Note The errors have several possible corrections but in the answers section I show only one correction for each error. Yoga and Y all An Excerpt If you only learn one yoga posture this should be it. Beginners can even do it. To form the Greeting Turtle Posture the mat should extend from knees to armpits freshly laundered and dried to fluffiness. While bending the right knee up to the nose the left ankle relaxes. You should almost bend the knee for a minute before straightening it again. Throw your head back now extending each muscle to its fullest only breathing two or three times before returning the head to its original position. Tucking the chin close to the collarbone the nose should wiggle. Finally raise the arms to the sky and bless the yoga posture that is blue. Chapter 15 Going on Location Placing Descriptions Correctly Answers to Description Placement Problems a Because she was celebrating an important birthday Ms. Jonge gave us only ten hours of homework. The implication of this sentence is that she could have given twenty hours. Because the number of hours is the issue the only belongs in front of ten hours not in front of gave. B The first task seemed nearly impossible to write an essay about the benefits of getting older. If it nearly seemed it did not seem just approached that state. But that s not what you re trying to say here. Instead the task
