That strategy is called argument mapping. The idea behind argument mapping is simple: test-takers acquire speaking and writing strategies faster and more proficiently if they can visualize them. Knowing this, I designed the argument map for the TOEFL iBT. | Integrated Essay - 109 Finally and this point I really want to stress What I do in the privacy of my home is nobody s business but my own. Period. I don t need the government telling me what I can or can t do with my computer. The United States is a democracy not a dictatorship. To sum up just because I refuse to pay for downloaded music does not make me a felon. The real criminals are those in government and business determined to deny music-loving individuals their right to freedom and privacy. Some body paragraphs will not start with a transition. In this case use formatting to identify them. For example look at the following body paragraphs. Notice how the first sentence of each body paragraph is indented moved in from the margin . This formatting style signals the start of a new body paragraph when there is no transition. A new body paragraph signals the start of another supporting example TiC or the conclusion. Notice how the last indentation signals the start of the conclusion. This in turn signals a restating of the author s opinion. Note Body paragraphs can also be separated by a space. indent If you re like me you love to share music with your friends by downloading it from their computers. This is not stealing music. Hardly. My friends and I are simply sharing songs. In fact I share music with people all over the world people I don t know and will never meet. This process is called P2P or peer-to-peer file sharing. Now think Is sharing something that you love a crime I don t think so. I really want to stress this point what I do in the privacy of my home is nobody s business but my own. Period. I don t need the government telling me what I can or can t do with my computer. The United States is a democracy not a dictatorship. Just because I refuse to pay for downloaded music does not make me a felon. The real criminals are those in government and business determined to deny music-loving individuals their right to freedom and privacy. 110 - Integrated .
