Đối với một điều, bạn sẽ có thể gạch dưới, vòng tròn, hoặc nhãn hiệu khác trên văn bản (tốt, bạn có thể, nhưng trung tâm kiểm nghiệm có lẽ sẽ không được hạnh phúc nếu bạn đổ nát màn hình máy tính của mình!). | Also the talk says that fermenting happens very fast. This fermenting leads to a foam which people probably tasted as the first beer. In the reading it is argued that fermenting made people think to bake the bread. The professor doubts this point by stating it is unlikely. Finally the profesor argues that people woud not think to bake the wheat. The point is made that early people do not cook things. These points made by the teacher cast doubt on the reading. It seems like beer not bread was the first wheat food. Score and Analysis of This Response Score 5 This essay received the highest possible score of 5 because it docs many things well. First it is extremely well organized. It has a clear introduction body paragraphs and a conclusion. It is also easy to follow because the essay uses appropriate transitions to link ideas. Also the essay has a good length 199 words. More important the author mentions several specific examples from the talk and shows how they are different from the points in the reading. That level of detail is necessary for a top score on the TOEFL. This essay is by no means perfect. The writer misspelled professor throughout the essay and makes a number of errors with subject-verb agreement for example the teacher cast doubt instead of casts doubt . However the errors do not detract from the overall message of the essay. A Lower-Scoring Response Following is an example of a lower-scoring response to the first practice drill. In early cultures there were different ways of using wheat. Some cultures use wheat for making bread and some ohers used it to make beer. It is said by the instructor though that it is the beer that was made first. Another thing is that fermenting of the wheat created beer not bread. The professor said that the people would not bake the foam but instead they would drink it like beer. the lecture shows that early peoples rarely used fire to make things. They didn t think to make the bread form the wheat that they had ground.
